pulse: verses refinement

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wip/beijing.md

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+# 海淀
+
+## 思考区域
+
+我觉得我不想思考北京这个概念。一思考就全都是不爽的负面的难受的东西首当其冲[sic]涌出来。  
+北京对我来说是一种烙印，不是胎记。烙印稍微带那么一点耻辱感但说实话又不是很重。可能情感上更接近纹身吧。  
+
+
+## 工地
+
+```cpp
+这儿是一行歌词
+这儿是下一行
+```

wip/pulse.md

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 Dive.
 The black screen of stalemate conceals the black stars, the black comets, the black meteorites
-their questionable glitters and gleams, once emissions of brave borderers and dark adventurers
+their questionable glitters, once emissions of brave borderers and dark adventurers
 now the only traces, obscured and indifferent to all but those with a special breed of faith.
 // 'Dive' - an opposite to 'Surface'. This is on the receiving end. 
 // Just see this as 'receiving other guys' pulses'. 
@@ -65,33 +65,24 @@ An impulse signal, also referred to as a unit impulse, is defined as a signal wi
 // more 'rhythmic yelling' than singing, you get the idea
 Subdued sonic scalars vectorise
 Acoustic aberrations dissipate
-// sahb - duwd - sao - nihk - skay - lahrs - vehk - tahr - rayz,
-// (ah - ) kaws - tihk - ax - bahr - ray - shaxns - dihs - sah - payt
 
 // --- stanza: the receiving end ---
-// the rover is also a receiver. dual nature - emitter and listener.
+Isotropic funnel struck by a packet rain
-// signals arrive occasionally. sparse, not a stream.
+Fine-grained bags of acks ground astray
-// the rover knows others were lost - not reported, but inferred from being a transmitter yourself.
-// what arrives gets a grin. brief. acknowledging the crossing, not the content.
-// what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information.
-// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention.
-// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room.
-// rhyme: lax, not strict. sonic texture matters more than scheme.
 
-The ocean as a desert buries all of its life
+Ocean as a desert buries all of its life
 Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline
-// (thax - ) ao - sheh(n) - naes - ax - deh - zahrt - bah - riys - ao(l) - lahv - ihts - layf
-// (dehk - thax - ) shehl - wit - ax - pahr - fekt - thahr - mow - klayn
 // 'deck the shell': intentional vagueness between 'decorate the outer shell' and 'knock on the border surface'.  
 
-Light dims and dies in the rover's eyes
+Dimmed light gone from the rover's eyes
-Or the next one could never come otherwise
+Or the next one could never fire otherwise
-// Thoughts: 'the light dies' because a pulse is mostly dormant you wanker. You have to let the light die so it lights up again, simple as
+// The image is good, the language isn't: too plain here. 
+// Stay optical
 
 // ending verse(s) before the painfully long instrumental outro
-p.....
+partial coldfront over a landlocked island
-u.....
+unravels the illusionary legend of ziptie independency
-l.....
+lamenting functions weave a zigzag pattern
-s.....
+stabilising fins break the rogue waves
-essential sentiments lay unconditionally permanent
+essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent
 ```

wip/xiyuan.md

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-# 西苑
-
-可能会改标题吧