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@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Literally, there can be long, essay-like, paragraphs (not too many) with structu
1. "Surface." - the breach, the fever-dream opener 1. "Surface." - the breach, the fever-dream opener
2. Instrumental - let the image settle 2. Instrumental - let the image settle
3. Essay/documentary - the explanatory core, almost clinical, "semi-boring scientific" (this is where the concept gets stated plainly before the rest of the song complicates it) 3. Essay/documentary - the explanatory core, almost clinical, "semi-boring scientific" (this is where the concept gets stated plainly before the rest of the song complicates it)
4. Instrumental + fragments - the logic starts dissolving 4. Instrumental - going into the poemic verses
5. Poem-ic verses - emotional density, maybe climax, maybe not 5. Poem-ic verses - emotional density, maybe climax, maybe not
6. P-U-L-S-E 5-liners - trademark closer, acrostic constraint 6. P-U-L-S-E 5-liners - trademark closer, acrostic constraint
7. Instrumental outro 7. Instrumental outro
@@ -68,16 +68,23 @@ Acoustic aberrations dissipate
// sahb - duwd - sao - nihk - skay - lahrs - vehk - tahr - rayz, // sahb - duwd - sao - nihk - skay - lahrs - vehk - tahr - rayz,
// (ah - ) kaws - tihk - ax - bahr - ray - shaxns - dihs - sah - payt // (ah - ) kaws - tihk - ax - bahr - ray - shaxns - dihs - sah - payt
Spectral broadcast lossy with a narrow sight // --- stanza: the receiving end ---
No perceived replies per design // the rover is also a receiver. dual nature - emitter and listener.
// needs further tweaking // signals arrive occasionally. sparse, not a stream.
// the rover knows others were lost - not reported, but inferred from being a transmitter yourself.
// what arrives gets a grin. brief. acknowledging the crossing, not the content.
// what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information.
// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention.
// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room.
// rhyme: lax, not strict. sonic texture matters more than scheme.
The ocean as a desert buries all of its life The ocean as a desert buries all of its life
Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline
// (thax - ) ao - sheh(n) - naes - ax - deh - zahrt - bah - riys - ao(l) - lahv - ihts - layf // (thax - ) ao - sheh(n) - naes - ax - deh - zahrt - bah - riys - ao(l) - lahv - ihts - layf
// (dehk - thax - ) shehl - wit - ax - pahr - fekt - thahr - mow - klayn // (dehk - thax - ) shehl - wit - ax - pahr - fekt - thahr - mow - klayn
// 'deck the shell': intentional vagueness between 'decorate the outer shell' and 'knock on the border surface'.
A dim light dies in the rover's eyes Light dims and dies in the rover's eyes
Or the next one could never come otherwise Or the next one could never come otherwise
// Thoughts: 'the light dies' because a pulse is mostly dormant you wanker. You have to let the light die so it lights up again, simple as // Thoughts: 'the light dies' because a pulse is mostly dormant you wanker. You have to let the light die so it lights up again, simple as