pulse: something good

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// what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information. // what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information.
// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention. // tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention.
// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room. // could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room.
// rhyme: lax, not strict. sonic texture matters more than scheme. A remnant funnel struck by a packet rain
Oscillation Fine-grained acknowledgements ground astray
The ocean as a desert buries all of its life The ocean as a desert buries all of its life
Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline
@@ -95,5 +94,5 @@ p.....
u..... u.....
l..... l.....
s..... s.....
essential sentiments lay unconditionally permanent essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent
``` ```