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Wan Ziyu
2026-03-03 18:06:58 +09:00
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@@ -76,9 +76,8 @@ Acoustic aberrations dissipate
// what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information.
// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention.
// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room.
// rhyme: lax, not strict. sonic texture matters more than scheme.
Oscillation
A remnant funnel struck by a packet rain
Fine-grained acknowledgements ground astray
The ocean as a desert buries all of its life
Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline
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essential sentiments lay unconditionally permanent
essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent
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