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Wan Ziyu
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@@ -65,34 +65,24 @@ An impulse signal, also referred to as a unit impulse, is defined as a signal wi
// more 'rhythmic yelling' than singing, you get the idea // more 'rhythmic yelling' than singing, you get the idea
Subdued sonic scalars vectorise Subdued sonic scalars vectorise
Acoustic aberrations dissipate Acoustic aberrations dissipate
// sahb - duwd - sao - nihk - skay - lahrs - vehk - tahr - rayz,
// (ah - ) kaws - tihk - ax - bahr - ray - shaxns - dihs - sah - payt
// --- stanza: the receiving end --- // --- stanza: the receiving end ---
// the rover is also a receiver. dual nature - emitter and listener. Isotropic funnel struck by a packet rain
// signals arrive occasionally. sparse, not a stream. Fine-grained bags of acks ground astray
// the rover knows others were lost - not reported, but inferred from being a transmitter yourself.
// what arrives gets a grin. brief. acknowledging the crossing, not the content.
// what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information.
// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention.
// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room.
Agnostic funnel struck by a packet rain
Fine-grained acknowledgements ground astray
Ocean as a desert buries all of its life Ocean as a desert buries all of its life
Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline
// (thax - ) ao - sheh(n) - naes - ax - deh - zahrt - bah - riys - ao(l) - lahv - ihts - layf
// (dehk - thax - ) shehl - wit - ax - pahr - fekt - thahr - mow - klayn
// 'deck the shell': intentional vagueness between 'decorate the outer shell' and 'knock on the border surface'. // 'deck the shell': intentional vagueness between 'decorate the outer shell' and 'knock on the border surface'.
Dim light dead in the rover's eyes Dimmed light gone from the rover's eyes
Or the next one could never fire otherwise Or the next one could never fire otherwise
// Thoughts: 'the light dies' because a pulse is mostly dormant you wanker. You have to let the light die so it lights up again, simple as // The image is good, the language isn't: too plain here.
// Stay optical
// ending verse(s) before the painfully long instrumental outro // ending verse(s) before the painfully long instrumental outro
partial coldfront over a landlocked island partial coldfront over a landlocked island
unravels the illusion of independent unravels the illusionary legend of ziptie independency
lamenting functions weave a zigzag pattern lamenting functions weave a zigzag pattern
stablising fins break the rogue waves stabilising fins break the rogue waves
essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent
``` ```