From cd8fc1ab2a5fe4177f0fae59535d1fae5adbe907 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Wan Ziyu Date: Tue, 14 Apr 2026 15:30:15 +0900 Subject: [PATCH] pulse: verses refinement --- wip/pulse.md | 24 +++++++----------------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-) diff --git a/wip/pulse.md b/wip/pulse.md index bf6198f..6a82c31 100644 --- a/wip/pulse.md +++ b/wip/pulse.md @@ -65,34 +65,24 @@ An impulse signal, also referred to as a unit impulse, is defined as a signal wi // more 'rhythmic yelling' than singing, you get the idea Subdued sonic scalars vectorise Acoustic aberrations dissipate -// sahb - duwd - sao - nihk - skay - lahrs - vehk - tahr - rayz, -// (ah - ) kaws - tihk - ax - bahr - ray - shaxns - dihs - sah - payt // --- stanza: the receiving end --- -// the rover is also a receiver. dual nature - emitter and listener. -// signals arrive occasionally. sparse, not a stream. -// the rover knows others were lost - not reported, but inferred from being a transmitter yourself. -// what arrives gets a grin. brief. acknowledging the crossing, not the content. -// what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information. -// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention. -// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room. -Agnostic funnel struck by a packet rain -Fine-grained acknowledgements ground astray +Isotropic funnel struck by a packet rain +Fine-grained bags of acks ground astray Ocean as a desert buries all of its life Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline -// (thax - ) ao - sheh(n) - naes - ax - deh - zahrt - bah - riys - ao(l) - lahv - ihts - layf -// (dehk - thax - ) shehl - wit - ax - pahr - fekt - thahr - mow - klayn // 'deck the shell': intentional vagueness between 'decorate the outer shell' and 'knock on the border surface'. -Dim light dead in the rover's eyes +Dimmed light gone from the rover's eyes Or the next one could never fire otherwise -// Thoughts: 'the light dies' because a pulse is mostly dormant you wanker. You have to let the light die so it lights up again, simple as +// The image is good, the language isn't: too plain here. +// Stay optical // ending verse(s) before the painfully long instrumental outro partial coldfront over a landlocked island -unravels the illusion of independent +unravels the illusionary legend of ziptie independency lamenting functions weave a zigzag pattern -stablising fins break the rogue waves +stabilising fins break the rogue waves essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent ``` \ No newline at end of file