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pulse: ending verse initial version

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Wan Ziyu
2026-04-01 14:53:47 +09:00
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@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ Acoustic aberrations dissipate
// what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information.
// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention.
// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room.
Flimsy funnel struck by a packet rain
Agnostic funnel struck by a packet rain
Fine-grained acknowledgements ground astray
Ocean as a desert buries all of its life
@@ -90,9 +90,9 @@ Or the next one could never fire otherwise
// Thoughts: 'the light dies' because a pulse is mostly dormant you wanker. You have to let the light die so it lights up again, simple as
// ending verse(s) before the painfully long instrumental outro
p.....
u.....
l.....
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partial coldfront over a landlocked island
unravels the illusion of independent
lamenting functions weave a zigzag pattern
stablising fins break the rogue waves
essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent
```