From c74698d75bbc47694a24513302d48e5bdc11cb91 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Wan Ziyu Date: Wed, 1 Apr 2026 14:53:47 +0900 Subject: [PATCH] pulse: ending verse initial version --- wip/pulse.md | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/wip/pulse.md b/wip/pulse.md index 347f8d0..efa5e54 100644 --- a/wip/pulse.md +++ b/wip/pulse.md @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ Acoustic aberrations dissipate // what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information. // tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention. // could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room. -Flimsy funnel struck by a packet rain +Agnostic funnel struck by a packet rain Fine-grained acknowledgements ground astray Ocean as a desert buries all of its life @@ -90,9 +90,9 @@ Or the next one could never fire otherwise // Thoughts: 'the light dies' because a pulse is mostly dormant you wanker. You have to let the light die so it lights up again, simple as // ending verse(s) before the painfully long instrumental outro -p..... -u..... -l..... -s..... +partial coldfront over a landlocked island +unravels the illusion of independent +lamenting functions weave a zigzag pattern +stablising fins break the rogue waves essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent ``` \ No newline at end of file