diff --git a/wip/pulse.md b/wip/pulse.md
index efa5e54..bf6198f 100644
--- a/wip/pulse.md
+++ b/wip/pulse.md
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline
 // (dehk - thax - ) shehl - wit - ax - pahr - fekt - thahr - mow - klayn
 // 'deck the shell': intentional vagueness between 'decorate the outer shell' and 'knock on the border surface'.  
 
-Dim light fades from the rover's eyes
+Dim light dead in the rover's eyes
 Or the next one could never fire otherwise
 // Thoughts: 'the light dies' because a pulse is mostly dormant you wanker. You have to let the light die so it lights up again, simple as