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Wan Ziyu
2026-04-01 12:50:51 +09:00
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@@ -76,17 +76,17 @@ Acoustic aberrations dissipate
// what didn't arrive is genuinely unknown. not mourned. the protocol doesn't carry that information.
// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention.
// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room.
A remnant funnel struck by a packet rain
Flimsy funnel struck by a packet rain
Fine-grained acknowledgements ground astray
The ocean as a desert buries all of its life
Ocean as a desert buries all of its life
Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline
// (thax - ) ao - sheh(n) - naes - ax - deh - zahrt - bah - riys - ao(l) - lahv - ihts - layf
// (dehk - thax - ) shehl - wit - ax - pahr - fekt - thahr - mow - klayn
// 'deck the shell': intentional vagueness between 'decorate the outer shell' and 'knock on the border surface'.
Light dims and dies in the rover's eyes
Or the next one could never come otherwise
Dim light fades from the rover's eyes
Or the next one could never fire otherwise
// Thoughts: 'the light dies' because a pulse is mostly dormant you wanker. You have to let the light die so it lights up again, simple as
// ending verse(s) before the painfully long instrumental outro