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@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Distant stations estimated in abnormal heat perform the collimation rite.
Dive. Dive.
The black screen of stalemate conceals the black stars, the black comets, the black meteorites The black screen of stalemate conceals the black stars, the black comets, the black meteorites
their questionable glitters and gleams, once emissions of brave borderers and dark adventurers their questionable glitters, once emissions of brave borderers and dark adventurers
now the only traces, obscured and indifferent to all but those with a special breed of faith. now the only traces, obscured and indifferent to all but those with a special breed of faith.
// 'Dive' - an opposite to 'Surface'. This is on the receiving end. // 'Dive' - an opposite to 'Surface'. This is on the receiving end.
// Just see this as 'receiving other guys' pulses'. // Just see this as 'receiving other guys' pulses'.
@@ -77,6 +77,8 @@ Acoustic aberrations dissipate
// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention. // tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention.
// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room. // could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room.
// rhyme: lax, not strict. sonic texture matters more than scheme. // rhyme: lax, not strict. sonic texture matters more than scheme.
Oscillation
The ocean as a desert buries all of its life The ocean as a desert buries all of its life
Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline