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@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Distant stations estimated in abnormal heat perform the collimation rite.
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Dive.
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The black screen of stalemate conceals the black stars, the black comets, the black meteorites
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their questionable glitters and gleams, once emissions of brave borderers and dark adventurers
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their questionable glitters, once emissions of brave borderers and dark adventurers
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now the only traces, obscured and indifferent to all but those with a special breed of faith.
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// 'Dive' - an opposite to 'Surface'. This is on the receiving end.
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// Just see this as 'receiving other guys' pulses'.
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@@ -77,6 +77,8 @@ Acoustic aberrations dissipate
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// tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention.
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// could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room.
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// rhyme: lax, not strict. sonic texture matters more than scheme.
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Oscillation
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The ocean as a desert buries all of its life
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Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline
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