From 53c817f046c858e0436216b495d42929502497e3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mikkeli Matlock Date: Tue, 3 Mar 2026 11:59:14 +0900 Subject: [PATCH] pulse: minor changes --- wip/pulse.md | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/wip/pulse.md b/wip/pulse.md index c74da50..bdfd4a9 100644 --- a/wip/pulse.md +++ b/wip/pulse.md @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Distant stations estimated in abnormal heat perform the collimation rite. Dive. The black screen of stalemate conceals the black stars, the black comets, the black meteorites -their questionable glitters and gleams, once emissions of brave borderers and dark adventurers +their questionable glitters, once emissions of brave borderers and dark adventurers now the only traces, obscured and indifferent to all but those with a special breed of faith. // 'Dive' - an opposite to 'Surface'. This is on the receiving end. // Just see this as 'receiving other guys' pulses'. @@ -77,6 +77,8 @@ Acoustic aberrations dissipate // tone: observational, not mournful. emotion doesn't assert itself - detectable only if you're paying attention. // could be more than a couplet. give it room if it needs room. // rhyme: lax, not strict. sonic texture matters more than scheme. +Oscillation + The ocean as a desert buries all of its life Deck the shell with a perfect thermocline